Six-Above
At first I think of us as Astronauts, Each of us stepping out of our capsule Onto to a frozen world We are alone here, Three strangers among a field of white, The cosmic equivalent of a dead planet...
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~Jim~ Welcome to New Horizons....what a phenomenally brushed spill that pulls the reader into the heartbeat of the metaphors, into the whispers beneath the surface of the verses.... Quote:At first I...
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WOW....this was a great read.... welcome to new horizons! *my music molds me into me*
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Jim, Loved the images..wonderfully written, can so relate to six above..and -20 windchill. Enjoyed, and Welcome Hugs Sky
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I really love this philosophical way that this poems lends towards. I really enjoyed it and yes, welcome
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welcome....i know you will enjoy yourself......... your creation is rather interesting....i love the perspective....very unique.......
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Hi everyone, and thanks for the comments and welcome! I greatly appreciate all of you taking the time to read my work. Best, Jim
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"Erasing our existence in Its slow, steady drift of snow" The depth in that line alone can be read is different senses. For instance,how very limited our effect on the world is in the scope of time's...
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A cool journey Jim !!! thanks for the sight ! And _________________________________________________ Musann - Home of the Unsigned Rock and Metal Bands
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I can't imagine all that snow! Love the metaphors, as has been stated above me. Looking forward to the next one already! WELCOME!
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I love fresh snow too, it seems to purify things. I enjoyed this little succinct snippet. Red
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Hi Jim, The metaphorical scenery in this one stands out with your gifted pen. Much enjoyed the depth, cadence and delivery too. Welcome to New Horizons Lit with Kick!
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